I think Jame's legs are a bit too long for his body and maybe his right foot could have faced a bit more forward to give it a more natural look . On the other hand, Lily's pose is absolutely perfect. You've got the sense of motion down! Well done
Man, I absolutely LOVE this!!!! It's completely brilliant!!! I gotta tell you, all your beautiful, sweet James and Lily art is making me want to write a fanfic for them - they may be my next project! Haha Idk, so many more people write about James and Lily, and it is rather odd to think about writing in HP other than Tonks and Lupin! But we shall see Though every time I see another sweet picture of yours, it makes me want to- at least I'd have a writer's block fix! Hahaha This is awesome!!!
You're welcome! Btw, so sorry about my blond moment with your new J/L drawing...that was embarrassing! LOL! It really does look like James and Lily, but I had seen some drawings of a couple recently on here that looked like James and Lily and weren't, so I just sorta had a moment! Sorry about that! I would like to, but I shall restrain myself and finish my Tonks and Lupin story first...though your art is so sweet it's making it hard! heehee